Higher Level 2: Basic D Some really good ideas - well thought through and detailed, but very little care in the delivery which will restrict your marks. Little care in the presentation (background noise, no cut aways to clips, images of the artist or test footage?, images of this 'vintage' look, references to ideas from existing examples etc) Why have you not put the track over this in the background? It is apparent you are reading this off the screen - this will again restrict your marks, a pity as you have got the idea but not put in the time to realise them to collect the R&P grade - I would be surprised if this took 3 hours of class time between the 3 of you.
As requested by the task brief, include your mood board, test footage, target audience profile, examples of image from your analysis and references to where the idea came from.
You have until assessment Week 6 to complete this to the expected standard in line with your target grades of B.
Higher Level 2: Basic
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Some really good ideas - well thought through and detailed, but very little care in the delivery which will restrict your marks.
Little care in the presentation (background noise, no cut aways to clips, images of the artist or test footage?, images of this 'vintage' look, references to ideas from existing examples etc)
Why have you not put the track over this in the background?
It is apparent you are reading this off the screen - this will again restrict your marks, a pity as you have got the idea but not put in the time to realise them to collect the R&P grade - I would be surprised if this took 3 hours of class time between the 3 of you.
As requested by the task brief, include your mood board, test footage, target audience profile, examples of image from your analysis and references to where the idea came from.
You have until assessment Week 6 to complete this to the expected standard in line with your target grades of B.
Still not improved?
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